The story “The Revenge of
Seven” by Pittacus Lore is about a group of teens that were sent to earth after
the antagonists, the mogadorians, destroyed their old planet Lorien. The mogadorians
are all about succeeding and progress so they came to earth too so that they
could use all of their resources. The mogadorians also are tracking down the
group of Lorien children, because those children can bring down the mogadorians.
Another reason that the nine children were sent down is to restart the legacy
of Lorien. The mogadorians don’t want these Loric teens to stop them. They
promote what they call “mogadorian progress” where they control every planet in
the galaxy by turning every living thing into a mogadorians. Through out the
book they refrain from showing the opinions of the antagonists, the mogadorians,
and only show the opinions of the Loric children that were sent down to earth. The
reason that Lore doesn’t show the opinion of the mogadorians is because he
doesn’t want us to believe that the mogadorians could actually be good, he
wants us to believe that there are only two sides, those who are bad and those
who are good.
One of the characters is
Ella, she is the tenth of the Loric children, her father was selfish and rich
and wanted her to get to earth and continue her family legacy. All her life she
thought that she was the same as the other nine that she was sent to earth with.
She ends up finding out that her grandfather is the evil mastermind behind the
mogadorians, Setrákus Ra, he ends up kidnaping Ella and raises her as a the
mogadorians royalty. The whole time Ella tells herself that Setrákus Ra isn’t
her grandfather and that he is very evil because he killed many of the loric
children that were sent to earth, but as we read through the book we see that she
sees that there is a possibility that they’re related, but regardless she
refuses to believe that what Setrákus Ra plan is for the earth is appropriate.
“Glorious, isn’t it?’/ His booming voice is like a bucket of cold water dumped
on me. I spin around and press my back against the glass; feeling like the void
behind me might be preferable to facing him. / Setrákus Ra stands behind one of
the control panels, watching me, a hint of a smile on his face.” This is an
example of how Pittacus Lore gives us really strong details to describe Ella is
feeling and thinking, but barely shows us what Setrákus Ra is feeling or
thinking when he sees Ella looking completely defenseless, he may be thinking
about things that are helpful or the plans that he has for Ella, but because in
the previous books we see him as the bad guy, when we read this we predict and
assume that he is thinking about harmful and mischievous plans that will happen.
Because Lore fails to show the side of Setrákus Ra it doesn’t let us have our
own personal opinions on Setrákus Ra. Pittacus Lore has set up the two sides
that we have to see, and is spinning us towards the protagonists.
Another example of how the
mogadorians opinions aren’t shown is when one of the mogadorians actually
starts to fight with the Loric. This character’s name is Adam, he was a
mogadorian who was sentenced to death by his father because he didn’t conform
to the mogadorian way. Instead of being executed he ran away and wanted to help
the Loric. Because the Loric have Adam it makes their work easier to hack into
the mogadorian information and also translate the mogadorians private
documents. Throughout the story Lore puts examples of where Adam is being
insulted or annoyed, but doesn’t say anything. “Marina’s still figuring out
just how angry she wants to be, and I’m not going to get in her way. Besides, I
don’t think putting a little fear in our mogadorian companion is such a bad
thing. / I assume he’s just going to let the conversation die, but after a few
minutes Adam speaks up.“ This being told from the perspective of one of the
Loric, Six, she say things like “I think” or says “I assume” instead of Lore telling us what
Adam is actually thinking. Also during the few minutes that Adam was thinking
he probably had many things to retort to the girls to make them feel more
uncomfortable, but Lore didn’t show us the thought process that he was having.
Lore doesn’t show us the side of this mogadorian, because showing us this side
could make the reader think that the mogadorians has emotions, then that would
make the reader wonder “are all of the mogadorians like this one” and then that
would take us off the perspective that Pittacus Lore wants us to see.
Pittacus Lore doesn’t want
us to see the perspective of the mogadorians because we are supposed to see
them as the bad guys that make the Loric lives miserable and horrible. By
representing the mogadorians characters as evil he wanted to show that all of
the mogadorians are the enemy regardless of whom they are fighting for and that
the reader should be “rooting” for the Loric to win. But if we were able to
read the opinion of the mogadorians, then possibly the way that we view the
characters in the book could change, and the mogadorians strong belief in the
taking over the galaxy could be legitimate. If we could read the mogadorians
opinions as we do for the Loric children then we may change our side depending
on how we feel about their plan.
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